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                i am sitting here still and silent, what do i say to you?
  you have just told me how you betrayed me...i cant look at you, i cant listin to   
                        this any more, i cant listin to you any more!
                                                      

   i used to know you...you were the man who held me during that scary movie
   i used to know you...you were there when i need a shoulder to cry on when  
                               everything else was falling away
         i used to know you...you were  my friend when i had no other.
                                                      

              i am sitting here still and silent, what do i say to you?
  you have just told me how you betrayed me....i want to scream and tell u i hate   
                                             u, but i cant!
                                                      

               i used to know you...you were smilling on our wedding day
         i used to know you...you cryed when you held our son for the first time
   i used to know you...you loved to watch me dance in the shower and new that i
                                               could not sing.
                                                      

   i am sitting here still and silent with tears running down my face, no make up   
                                                    can fix me.
  you have just told me how you betrayed me... i want to run out and never look  
   back, but i cant! why cant i? is the question screaming and runing through my
head...why do i still sit here in silence and think about how i used to know you???
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Wrote this the other night, would really like some feed back. I hope u like it! :D
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:iconkerovin:
Oh that sounds kinda sad hun I hope it's not about you :shocked:
:hug: but it's lovely :)

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:icondancingsoul:
thank you and its not about me :hug: iam so glad u like it!

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:iconkerovin:
oh good it got me a little worried there :D
it is beautifuly writen :)

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:icondancingsoul:
thank you, it means alot that u like it :D :blowkiss:

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:iconkerovin:
you're welcome hun always a pleasure :hug:

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:hug:

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